Rough Layout for My TV Spot for 'Se7en Devils'

Now that I have outlined the storyline for my whole film here is a more in-depth layout of the order in which the elements will appear in my TV spot.

• Production company logos/idents 
• Voiceover of girls talking about visiting abandoned location
• Multiple rapidly edited shots of location
• Title card - Director 
• Fades to black between each shot 
• Shots of ouija board 
• Title card - Review
• Shot of knife stabbing down 
• Shots of shocked faces
• Title card - Tagline
• Whip pans of characters running 
• Title card - Film Title
• Shots of the monster
• Title card - Credits
• Title card - Release Date (In Cinemas Now)
• Non diegetic sinister music with impact sounds throughout, with loud scream at the end